Very good. I'm impressed that you created your own blog. Also, you went beyond the requirements of the assignment and you will receive extra credit for including links, photos, and a heartfelt discussion of a sport about which you are passionate! There are a lot of small errors in your essay and some "Frenchisms", but your English is comprehensible. Just work on it a bit.
Very good. I'm impressed that you created your own blog. Also, you went beyond the requirements of the assignment and you will receive extra credit for including links, photos, and a heartfelt discussion of a sport about which you are passionate!
ReplyDeleteThere are a lot of small errors in your essay and some "Frenchisms", but your English is comprehensible. Just work on it a bit.
Bruce Lee is also one of my heroes!